Saturday, November 05, 2005

the 55 words story

okay..really liked some of the short stories doing the rounds here. quite interesting. so i tag myself. here's mine-


"she saw him coming towards her, that dirty old man. before she knew it, he was dragging her away from her quiet corner. She froze. In a flash, her pink silk gown was on the floor. Silence. furtive glances bore into her beautiful naked body.

she felt alive..

almost..


..till he dressed up the mannequin again."

2 Comments:

Blogger divya said...

hey there! wassup? great story nd thanks for telling me abt the site!

4:29 AM  
Blogger Kunal said...

Beautiful, concise and complete. well thought.

3:16 AM  

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